I like the poem.

Great! Cheers all around.

Wow, ene parawo!

Time can be an unforgiving master, but when it's right...

This is a splendid poem Jimmy, in concept and presentation.

Couplets are good to use with uncomplicated and powerful messages.

Your last couplet is particularly spectacular - "when the earth is alight" - these last words light up the whole poem even as the reading ends.

In the second couplet I think 'spectrum wave' (which we can see) may be used for 'radio wave', and there is consonance in the 'sp'...

In the second last couplet "So don’t be away from me for even a day" - this reminds so much of Pablo Neruda's 'Don't go far off'...

Notice his simplicity of word choice when he is dealing with the very basics of expressing pure human emotion..

The image of the trains is powerful one for anyone who has been in a train station.

But for PNGians think of say, Four Mile bus stop, where all the empty PMV's would be parked empty if they were not in use, which is not quite the same idea but the image is similar.

Don't go far off, not even for a day, because --
because -- I don't know how to say it: a day is long
and I will be waiting for you, as in an empty station
when the trains are parked off somewhere else, asleep.

Don't leave me, even for an hour, because
then the little drops of anguish will all run together,
the smoke that roams looking for a home will drift
into me, choking my lost heart.

Oh, may your silhouette never dissolve on the beach;
may your eyelids never flutter into the empty distance.
Don't leave me for a second, my dearest,

because in that moment you'll have gone so far
I'll wander mazily over all the earth, asking,
Will you come back? Will you leave me here, dying?

Pablo Neruda was the first Nobel laureate for literature in poetry.

Beautifully written Jimmy.